Wednesday, November 5, 2008

随笔一写(1)

akira,你的诗出炉了啦!不过有点低水准。。哈哈 (考试时做的)

阳光,
透过窗台
照进心灵的灰暗处
看着摆放在桌角
喝不完的牛奶
冷了,温度不再
出双入对的蝴蝶
不在重现,
只剩下一只在默守悲哀
被遗忘的棋子
孤身作战
显得更加悲凄
当初的承诺
向刻在独木桥上的记号
挥之不去
却无法实现
心情,
像泡面的日记
难以了解
而寂寞,
仿佛被送去绞刑台的兔子
可怕却又那么真实。。

ps:这只是纯粹的一首诗,不要误会,朋友们。><

15 comments:

xXiaoXuanx said...

hehe haha

Elaine said...

pao mian de ri ji????pao mian very bei ai meh...lol

Cheng Ying said...

=.=
im tongueless ok..

walao!! tis w.v "perang" ne~
so cool.. xD~

Anonymous said...

wow...i tot u oni gonna choose one topic to write~who ask u combine all~~~lolx
demo ne,
ii (good) desuyo ~ gambatte kudasai~ XD *CLAP

xXiaoXuanx said...

hehe haha><

Elaine said...

i tot ii means its ok...lol...
sob...wo de sheng huo xiang pao mian....hu le...my exam really hu...= =

xXiaoXuanx said...

ke ke ke............. wakekeke

yunsun 君 said...

[elaine] paomian oso can rite diary de ma..its dieary everyday is same de:i am hot TT ..lolx

[akira] sure anot de..i think is sux leh..wakaka..bored ma,so all title combine lo..><

xXiaoXuanx said...

haha wakekekekekke

Anonymous said...

整体来讲还不错~
但是 如果有分段或许会更有感觉~

加油啦~
别放弃和荒废中文
你的中文真的不错噢!~

yunsun 君 said...

huanh fei? got such tat serious anot..like i throw into rubbishbin ..lolx

Elaine said...

pao mian pao mian~~~dunno y i dui this sentence te bie you gan qing...hahah

xXiaoXuanx said...

hah

yunsun 君 said...

mayb u dui d paomian got gan qing, maub it is ur qian shi qing ren..lolx..

xXiaoXuanx said...

==''' lolx.....