Saturday, November 8, 2008

随笔一写(2)

考试完毕,闲着没事就爱写东写西。。又有一个低俗诗的诞生。。请诸位看了留下珍贵的读后感,好让我自我检讨。><


时间在阴暗的胡同里
嘀嗒嘀嗒地流逝
影子在昏黄的灯光下
拉得修长
行李箱在颤抖的双脚下
显的焦虑不耐烦
月亮因坚贞不移的爱,哭了
星星因虚假的海誓山盟,碎了
虫鸣嘲笑她的愚鲁
野狗怜悯她的遭遇
泪水为失望的心寻找藉口
回忆在漫长深夜里寻找肯定
继续等待抑或放弃
盘旋在思绪里踌躇不豫

32 comments:

xXiaoXuanx said...

你说的字的太深了。。(对我来说啦)。。我看不懂=='''hehe haha =o.o=...but still can understand a bit la my chi not so lan ==

yunsun 君 said...

lolx

Elaine said...

im thinking a title for it...
hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....

xXiaoXuanx said...

hehe haha^^

Cheng Ying said...

haiz.. chut shu lo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yunsun 君 said...

haha..no sponser wor..u sponser?

Cheng Ying said...

ask in3 in3...

Elaine said...

= =...like i very rich like tht..

xXiaoXuanx said...

haha

Cheng Ying said...

emm.. u cha bat much lo..
i thk u can help ys publish 1000000000000000++ books gua..

p/s each book 1 page nia..
no nid design cover.. (no nid pay for tis)
no nid high-tech machine.. (photostat)
no nid bind all tat stuffs..(1 paper oni wad..)
no nid promote.. (eat kit kat let the paper fly around den can ady lo..)

SEE!! u jz nid to buy `double A papers nia..
its no the matter u rich or nt.. HHAA!

xXiaoXuanx said...

heha

yunsun 君 said...

=.= swt..

Cheng Ying said...

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Elaine said...

swtttt...like this still ok la...but no nid photostat means all call ys to write la??xDD

xXiaoXuanx said...

ha

yunsun 君 said...

walao..at least sponser pen or ink la..

Elaine said...

aiyohhhhh...ini also nid sponsor meh....suan liao..i've decided to sponsor RM1

xXiaoXuanx said...

hehe haha

yunsun 君 said...

rm1 so little..buy a pieces of paper oso not enuff la..lolx

xXiaoXuanx said...

then u buy lo==

yunsun 君 said...

haha..okay la..post through d blogs,den mai no nid use paper lo..

xXiaoXuanx said...

smart arhx....

yunsun 君 said...

haha..technology ma..

yunsun 君 said...

of coz smart la..if not cant b ur korkor liao..*proud

xXiaoXuanx said...

==.......i'm proud of you == ok jus kidding...... ==

xXiaoXuanx said...

i dont think its funny i think i'm lame==

yunsun 君 said...

lolx ya..can b lamer liao..haha

xXiaoXuanx said...

wala..... why u like this just say u gud u like this... ==

yunsun 君 said...

lolx..lamer oso gud ma..nvm la..i oso lamer..so got two lamer here..haha

xXiaoXuanx said...

but i not wor.... i lame but not lamer...

yunsun 君 said...

lame but not lamer? den i handsome but not gud looking? lolx

xXiaoXuanx said...

ai yo ...... wat i meant was i not always laming!!!!!